Week 8 Comments and Feedback

I think that I am receiving above average feedback from the people who visit my blog and storybook. People tend to provide more positive feedback, but they back it up with somewhat specific remarks about the content of the blog post. The longer constructive feedback that I see on the blog is nice to help catch some of the things that I may have missed.

I think that I am leaving sub par feedback on other people's blogs because I have a hard time providing criticism on writing because I don't think I am any good. I want to give more constructive comments, but I am too scared to do it.

I think that I get a decent window in the characteristics of each person from their blogs. I also think that my introduction post is good. It gives people a superficial overview of me.

I want to improve the criticism I provide in my feedback comments.

This is a Feedback Cat that embodies what I think is most important. Source

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