Week 7 Story: Duryodhana Strikes
Duryodhana
sat alone in his study and puzzled over the popularity of his cousins. Earlier
in the day he had walked through the market and only heard mention of his
cousins. He heard no mention of him or any of his brothers. This omission
angered him greatly. He wanted to step out of the shadow of his cousins and
into the light of the public eye. He wanted to be the king. Finally, after he could
take no more of the anger he felt, he retired to his bed chambers.
Duryodhana wake the next day and left
for the palace to meet with his father, Dhritarashtra. On his way he listened for
any talk of him and his brothers. He heard nothing. Instead he heard that Yudhistira
had been crowned heir apparent. Enraged by this news, he stormed to through the
gates of the palace and into his father’s study. He slammed his hands on the
desk and demanded that his father explain why he named Yudhistira as heir
apparent. Dhritarashtra, displeased, looked up from his work and stared down
his glasses at Duryodhana. He measured his words and told Duryodhana that he chose
Yudhistira because he was so proud of his accomplishment under Drona. Duryodhana
beseeched his father to reconsider the decision and explained to him that this
announcement undermines his authority as king.
Duryodhana said, “The people think
that you are abdicating your throne because they are blinded by admiration for my
cousins.”
Dhritarshtra, alarmed by this
account, told Duryodhana that he would consult his advisor on how to proceed. Dhritarshtra
called in his advisor and asked how they should proceed. The advisor suggested
that they lure the brothers into a trap.
Dhritarashtra decided to rid himself
of the sons of Pandu. He called Yudhistira to meet with him and told him that
he needed him to go to a land called Varanavata. Yudhistira accepted left soon
after.
Duryodhana listened in and set up a
meeting with an architect in Varanavata for Yudhistira. Because Yudhistira and
his brothers would be living in Varanavata for some time, they would need to
build a house. This architect constructs a grand house for the Pandu brothers,
but he packed the cavities of the walls with flammable materials such as straw
soaked in oil. When the Pandu brothers have moved in, he informs Duryodhana
that all has gone according to plan. Duryodhana orders that he set the house on
fire. After the fire burns the building to a crisp. They search the building
and find the charred remains of a woman and five men. Thinking he has killed
his enemies. Duryodhana returns home to bear the news to his father.
The Pandavas escape the fire. Source |
Author's Note:
I wanted to delve into the betrayal/court intrigue that happens in this epic. I thought the fire meant to kill the Pandavas would be a good topic. I told it from the perspective of Duryodhana because I wanted to highlight his rashness.
Bibliography
R.K. Narayan. Mahabharata. Kindle
Hey John,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your retelling of this story, especially since we never really get to see into Duryodhanas motives and reasoning. I really enjoyed the part where Duryodhana was walking through the kingdom and constantly heard talk of his cousins rather than his brothers, as I was better able to picture Duryodhana and why he was so evil in the book. Great work and I can't wait to read more
Hi John!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your approach of retelling the story from the point of view of the villain! I think if you expanded a little more on Duryodhana's thought process when he initially decides to hate the Pandava brothers, that could really add to the story. For example, maybe talk about how Duryodhana overheard the Pandava brothers laughing about how he was letting them take away his father's throne, or maybe he overheard them discussing how now that Yudhisthira was heir, they no longer had to pretend to care about the kingdom, and do all of the king's busy work. That would give Duyodhana a much more plausible motive for wanting to take down the Pandava brothers.
Hi John! I think you do a great job of having a unique approach to your story! I think that you could beef up your story a lot by maybe changing the names of characters or what they are. Just that little element can make a story seem much better. Also having new details is something that can help with the length of the story. Overall great job!
ReplyDeleteHi John! It was fun to read this story based on Duryodhana's perspective! Your story laid out why he could be so harsh, which is understandable to an extent. He was angry that he wasn't crowned heir anymore, however he didn't need to be so crazy and burn down the house! But his rashness got the best of him because he didn't think to check to see who the survivors of the fire were!
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